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You have been living in a rental apartment for the past year. Recently, a new neighbor moved in who has loud parties several times a week. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter: Explain the situation Describe why it bothers you Suggest a solution.

You have been living in a rental apartment for the past year. Recently, a new neighbor moved in who has loud parties several times a week. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter: Explain the situation Describe why it bothers you Suggest a solution. GYNj
Dear Mr. Ronch, I am writing this letter regarding my new loud tenants. Let me explain my situation. Your new renters are my neighbors. Since day one either they have loud music or house parties which involve late of people enjoying music or having conversations at abnormally high pitch. These parties usually end early morning next day. It’s like a routine for them. I had a conversation regarding this, But to my surprise there is no change in behavior. It’s a very irresponsible behavior on their part. This present situation bothers me a lot, As I am full time worker and also getting a new professional degree. It consume lot of mental and physical energy. At the end of the day I need good rest so that I can get ready at my best for next day. But when I am back I have to deal with this unpleasant situation. It’s declining my working potential immensely, I feel like restless and lack of energy while working, At times I feel like I can’t concentrate on my studies. It’s really making very difficult for me to keep up with my work and life Balance. Would you kindly change my apartment as this the best solution to my trouble. They can enjoy their music and late night gathering. It’s a win win situation for both the parties. I hope you will address these concern as soon as possible. Thanking you for your consideration. Your faithfully
Dear Mr.
Ronch
, I am writing this letter regarding my new loud tenants.

Let
me
explain
my
situation
. Your new renters are my neighbors. Since day one either they have loud music or
house
parties which involve late of
people
enjoying music or having conversations at
abnormally
high pitch. These parties
usually
end
early morning
next
day. It’s like a routine for them. I had a conversation regarding this,
But
to my surprise there is no
change
in behavior. It’s a
very
irresponsible behavior on their part.

This present
situation
bothers me a lot, As I am full time worker and
also
getting a new professional degree. It
consume
lot of
mental and physical energy. At the
end
of the day I need
good
rest
so
that I can
get
ready at my best for
next
day.
But
when I am back I
have to
deal with this unpleasant
situation
. It’s declining my working potential
immensely
, I feel like restless and lack of energy while working, At times I feel like I can’t concentrate on my studies. It’s
really
making
very
difficult for me to
keep
up with my work and life Balance.

Would you kindly
change
my apartment as this the best solution to my trouble. They can enjoy their music and late night gathering. It’s a
win win
situation
for both the parties. I hope you will address these concern as
soon
as possible. Thanking you for your consideration.

Your
faithfully
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IELTS letter You have been living in a rental apartment for the past year. Recently, a new neighbor moved in who has loud parties several times a week. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter: Explain the situation Describe why it bothers you Suggest a solution.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
242 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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