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You and your friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion and you were very pleased with the food and service. Write a letter to the restaurant manager- give details of your visit to the restaurant, explain the reason for the celebration, say what was good about the food and service.

You and your friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion and you were very pleased with the food and service. Write a letter to the restaurant manager- give details of your visit to the restaurant, explain the reason for the celebration, say what was good about the food and service. XGDRE
Dear Mr. Ball, The purpose of writing this letter is to show my satisfaction for your food and services. Last sunday in 2 March I and my friends visit your restaurant in the evening and booked a small hall of yours. That day was really remarkable for me as it was my 25th birthday. I am thankful you help me to make my date outstanding. Me and all my mates really enjoy all the dishes which were well presented and even staff was always there to offerv their services. Moreover, I do appricate your entrance decoration and interiors. The food was delicious neither oily nor spicy and we like your Italian dish which was your specilaty item. Waiter were extremely tidy and with effective communication skills. We all were consequently amazed about each and every thing. I would surely recommend your restaurant to other people also. I will glad to see therevin the near future. Yours FaithfullyMika
Dear Mr. Ball, The purpose of writing this letter is to
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my satisfaction for your food and services. Last
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sunday
in 2 March I and my friends visit your restaurant in the evening and booked a
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small
hall of
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. That day was
really
remarkable for me as it was my 25th birthday. I am thankful you
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help
me to
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make
my date outstanding. Me and all my mates
really
enjoy all the dishes which were well presented and even staff was always there to
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offerv
their services.
Moreover
, I do
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appricate
your entrance decoration and interiors. The food was delicious neither oily nor
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spicy and
we like your Italian dish which was your
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specilaty
item. Waiter were
extremely
tidy and with effective communication
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skills
. We all were
consequently
amazed about each and every thing. I would
surely
recommend your restaurant to other
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people
also
. I
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will glad
to
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see
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therevin
the near future.
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Yours
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FaithfullyMika

IELTS letter You and your friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion and you were very pleased with the food and service. Write a letter to the restaurant manager- give details of your visit to the restaurant, explain the reason for the celebration, say what was good about the food and service.

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  American English
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156 words
5.0
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