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You and your friend recently went a holiday together. you have a problem with your photos taken during the holiday. write a letter to ask your friend for a particular photo

You and your friend recently went a holiday together. you have a problem with your photos taken during the holiday. write a letter to ask your friend for a particular photo aQN0w
Dear John, Hope you are doing good. I have an issue with photos captured during the holiday. On the second day in the Zoo, I have taken many photos that all the photos got yellow tones and quality issues. so these all photos look like some paled glossy paper. I would like to get all photos which you have taken in the Zoo because my kids like all the animals and birds. and that day evening we sat on a big rock, near the rock our kids were playing, have you taken that photos? if it is there please share that and the garden photos too. Usually, I will keep all the photos and make Album. Whenever I get free time I would like to go through that, and that reminds me of all the fun and experience. Also, my kids are very fans of Lion and Elephant. I look forward to hearing from you. Best Regards, Bony Bastian
Dear John,

Hope you are doing
good
. I have an issue with
photos
captured during the holiday. On the second day in the Zoo, I have taken
many
photos
that all the
photos
got
yellow tones and quality issues.
so
these all
photos
look like
some
paled glossy paper.

I would like to
get
all
photos
which you have taken in the Zoo
because
my kids like all the animals and birds.
and
that day evening we sat on a
big
rock, near the rock our kids were playing, have you taken that
photos
?
if
it is there
please
share that and the garden
photos
too.

Usually
, I will
keep
all the
photos
and
make
Album. Whenever I
get
free time I would like to go through that, and that reminds me of all the fun and experience.
Also
, my kids are
very
fans of Lion and Elephant.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Best Regards,

Bony
Bastian
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IELTS letter You and your friend recently went a holiday together. you have a problem with your photos taken during the holiday. write a letter to ask your friend for a particular photo

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
158 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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