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Hello, my name is Song and I'm from the city of Vinh. I'm currently in my final year of middle school. I'm a little down in the dumps about my circumstances. I've always worked hard in school to please my parents, and I've always had high marks. But they have high expectations of me; they want me to excel in my examinations, which puts a lot of pressure on me. I always felt like a failure, and it was frustrating that I couldn't give my parents what they expected. In addition to pressure from parents, there is also pressure from teachers' homework. the teachers always give us a lot of homework even though we have to study many subjects and many other places. Sometimes I don't know how to deal with the homework because there are many, and if we don't do it, we will be reprimanded. I feel exhausted.

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hard
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 other places. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
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, and if we don't do it, we will be reprimanded
. I feel exhausted. 