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Letter to provide advice on summer camping

Letter to provide advice on summer camping 2KeqX
Dear Robert, I hope you have been keeping well and am glad that you have decided to try out camping this summer. Camping in summer is quite enjoyable as you will be able to see nature at its best while also enjoy the outdoors in dry weather conditions. You might also get to watch the stars which is a beautiful sight, at night. However, you might have to endure the scorching sun during the afternoon due being outdoors during the day. I am sure you’ll be able to use sunscreen to protect yourself from the sun but it would be best to bring a good hat as well. Also, you might have to deal with insects such as flies that get attracted to food and also sweat during the hot weather. Pest repellent would probably be a good idea to get rid of such insects. The last time I went summer camping was several years ago and if you’re willing, I’d love to join you on your holiday, this year. Yours truly, Dulmini
Dear Robert,

I hope you have been keeping well and am glad that you have decided to try out camping this summer.

Camping in summer is quite enjoyable as you will be able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
nature at its best while
also
enjoy the outdoors in dry weather conditions. You might
also
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get
to
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watch
the stars which is a
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beautiful
sight, at night.
However
, you might
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have to
endure the scorching sun during the afternoon due being outdoors during the day. I am sure you’ll be able to
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use
sunscreen to protect yourself from the sun
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but
it would be best to bring a
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good
hat
as well
.
Also
, you might
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have to
deal with insects such as flies that
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get
attracted to food and
also
sweat during the hot weather. Pest repellent would
probably
be a
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good
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idea
to
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get
rid of such insects.

The last time I went summer camping was several years ago and if you’re willing, I’d
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
to
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join
you on your holiday, this year.

Yours
truly
,

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Dulmini

IELTS letter Letter to provide advice on summer camping

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
172 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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