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newol Management and I am seeking employment with an organization known for the possession of Standardized Quality control and assurance practices in Manufacturing or Chemical industry. I would become a valuable addition to your organization. In my current job, I am mainly in charge of Qualit

newol Management and I am seeking employment with an organization known for the possession of Standardized Quality control and assurance practices in Manufacturing or Chemical industry. I would become a valuable addition to your organization. In my current job, I am mainly in charge of Qualit obQGg
I have 8 years experience of in Quality Contry operations from raw material Testing, in-process testing, final product testing, and research & development. I am also responsible for ISO 9001 QMS auditing, compliance, internal audit, 3rd party audit, and supplier audits. I had headed production operations for one year. I had reduced the batch timing of 3 products from 20 hours to 17 hours by analyzing data. I had analyzed customer complaints using the cause-effect technique and maintain 3 complaints in a year benchmark for 2 years. I had developed 2 different products using customer demand data. Standardize every process for a smooth and efficient process. The area where I have applied my talents excellent results is providing leadership during the incorporation of new technologies and adopting existing technologies to strategic Changes and the important ability to remain calm in stressful situations. My education qualification include a bachelor's degree in Chemical Engineering followed by Certifications in Quality management systems. I am a certified Quality professional who enables work in Statistical process control, lean management, and Total quality management. I had IRCA approves of ISO 9001 QMS lead auditor certification and helped me in the transition and implementation of the new standard. Recently I had attempted a 6-month professional diploma in Data analytics from GOOGLE to learn Data analytical methodology. I have attached my up-to-date resume for further review so please do not hesitate to contact me if you have any additional questions. Thank you for your time and consideration and I look forward to hearing back from you soon. Sincerely,
I have 8 years experience of in
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testing, final product testing, and research & development. I am
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responsible for ISO 9001
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auditing, compliance, internal audit, 3rd party audit, and supplier audits.
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had
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reduced
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analyzing
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data
.
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I
had analyzed customer complaints using the cause-effect technique and maintain 3

complaints in a
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benchmark for 2 years.
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I
had developed 2
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different
products using customer

demand
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data
. Standardize every process for a smooth and efficient process. The area where I have

applied my talents excellent results is providing leadership during the incorporation of new technologies

and adopting existing technologies to strategic
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Changes
and the
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important
ability to remain calm in

stressful situations.

My education qualification include a bachelor's degree in Chemical Engineering followed by

Certifications in
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Quality
management systems. I am a certified
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Quality
professional who enables work

in Statistical process control, lean management, and Total
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quality
management. I had
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IRCA


approves of ISO 9001
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QMS
lead auditor certification and
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helped
me in the transition and implementation

of the new standard. Recently I had attempted a 6-month professional diploma in
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Data
analytics from

GOOGLE to learn
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Data
analytical methodology. I have attached my up-to-date resume for
further


review
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so
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please
do not hesitate to contact me if you have any additional questions.

Thank you for your time and consideration and I look forward to hearing back from you
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soon
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Sincerely
,
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IELTS letter newol Management and I am seeking employment with an organization known for the possession of Standardized Quality control and assurance practices in Manufacturing or Chemical industry. I would become a valuable addition to your organization. In my current job, I am mainly in charge of Qualit

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