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Imagine you are going to study English in the UK, and are going to stay with Sally. She writes a similar email to you. Plan your reply to her email. What details do you need to give Sally? What do you need to decide?

Imagine you are going to study English in the UK, and are going to stay with Sally. She writes a similar email to you. Plan your reply to her email. What details do you need to give Sally? What do you need to decide? JVk3w
Hello, Sally Thanks for your email-I’m very happy to be staying with your family again. I also enjoyed staying with you and your family last August. I’m looking forward to it! I’m arriving at the Stansted airport on 28 August. I will arrive with flight number FR8721. You all don’t need to come to meet me in Arrivals. You alone are more than enough. My mobile number is 09262177087. This time, don’t forget to put it on your phone. About your questions, I can have a small bedroom for myself since I’m not good with strangers. I’m not sure when to go back to Croatia. This time, I’d like to visit many famous places and take a lot of photos to show my family and post them on Instagram. Looking forward to seeing you Best wishes Lae Ye Maung PS- I will bring souvenirs from Croatia for your family. Look forward to it!
Hello, Sally

Thanks for your email-I’m
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again. I
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last August. I’m looking forward to it!

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’m arriving at the
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airport on 28 August.
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will arrive with flight number FR8721. You all don’t need to
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me in Arrivals. You alone are more than
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. My mobile number is 09262177087. This time, don’t forget to put it on your phone.

About your questions, I can have a
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small
bedroom for myself since I’m not
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good
with strangers. I’m not sure when to go back to Croatia. This time, I’d like to visit
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famous
places and take
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photos to
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my
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Looking forward to seeing you

Best wishes

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PS- I will bring souvenirs from Croatia for your
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. Look forward to it!
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IELTS letter Imagine you are going to study English in the UK, and are going to stay with Sally. She writes a similar email to you. Plan your reply to her email. What details do you need to give Sally? What do you need to decide?

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153 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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