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you and your family are planning to visit your penfriend in England. your penfriend would like to cook a special meal to welcome you and has asked you for any advice and suggestions. write a letter to your penfriend , giving suitable advice and making useful suggestions

you and your family are planning to visit your penfriend in England. your penfriend would like to cook a special meal to welcome you and has asked you for any advice and suggestions. write a letter to your penfriend, giving suitable advice and making useful suggestions 2KeQJ
Dear Anna, Thanks for your last letter. I'm so excited to pay a visit with my family to your house in England. Hearing that you will wine and dine us with a special meal, I'd like to give some advice to you. Firstly, we are not fussy eaters, so you can feel comfortable when choosing the ingredients for your cooking. Especially, home-cooked foods will draw my parent's attention. They will be hooked on the foods like Pho or rice dishes. I will give you recipes to follow if you need them. About me, I take an avid interest in American cuisines such as pizza, sausage or spaghetti. However, if you do not have time to cook at home, it's pleasure to dine out. As you know, my younger sister has a sweet tooth, so you can prepare some ice cream cakes if you don't mind. Anyway, i'd better close now because it's getting late. Do write me soon and send me your news. Best wishes, John
Dear Anna, Thanks for your last letter. I'm
so
excited to pay a visit with my family to your
house
in England. Hearing that you will wine and dine us with a special meal, I'd like to give
some
advice to you.
Firstly
, we are not fussy eaters,
so
you can feel comfortable when choosing the ingredients for your cooking.
Especially
, home-cooked foods will draw my parent's attention. They will
be hooked
on the foods like
Pho
or rice dishes. I will give you recipes to follow if you need them. About me, I take an avid interest in American cuisines such as pizza, sausage or spaghetti.
However
, if you do not have time to cook at home, it's pleasure to dine out. As you know, my younger sister has a sweet tooth,
so
you can prepare
some
ice cream cakes if you don't mind. Anyway,
i'd
better close
now
because
it's getting late. Do write me
soon
and
send
me your news.

Best wishes, John
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IELTS letter you and your family are planning to visit your penfriend in England. your penfriend would like to cook a special meal to welcome you and has asked you for any advice and suggestions. write a letter to your penfriend, giving suitable advice and making useful suggestions

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
165 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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