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This is part of a letter you receive from an Australian friend. Write a letter, answering his/her questions in about 120 words Could you give me some advice? I want to travel around your country for a month. Where should go? What should I see?

This is part of a letter you receive from an Australian friend. Write a letter, answering his/her questions in about 120 words Could you give me some advice? I want to travel around your country for a month. Where should go? What should I see? kxVj8
Dear Linda, I'm very exhilarated to hear that you have decided to travel around my country for a month. In your letter, you asked me to give you some advice about travelling in Vietnam; here are some suggestions. In my country, there are a lot of interesting places to visit. For the fisrt place, it it advisable to travel in Hanoi where former President Barack Obama visited and appreciated the local cuisine. I firmly believe that you will be attracted by Bun Cha, snail rice noodles and Pho. After that, you can make a pit stop in Nha Trang. You may swim in the crystal blue ocean, bury yourself in the fine sand, and partake in enjoyable activities such as paragliding, windsurfing, canoeing, and flyboarding here. Do not forget to bring your camera to snap stunning photographs. I hope this advice helpsBest wishes, Truc.
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exhilarated to hear that you have decided to travel around my country for a month. In your letter, you asked me to give you
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advice about travelling in Vietnam; here are
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suggestions. In my country, there are
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interesting places to visit. For the
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. You may swim in the crystal blue ocean, bury yourself in the fine sand, and partake in enjoyable activities such as paragliding, windsurfing, canoeing, and
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IELTS letter This is part of a letter you receive from an Australian friend. Write a letter, answering his/her questions in about 120 words Could you give me some advice? I want to travel around your country for a month. Where should go? What should I see?

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  American English
1 paragraphs
144 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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