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formal letter

formal letter 86egr

Dear Principal I hope this letter finds you in good health and good times. I would like to bring your attention to an urgent matter relating to the school and its integrity, and the safety of its students. Recently, the bus driver Akram has been very reckless while driving and also very rude to almost everybody. On the 1st of August, I saw him staring at some students with an odd look on his face without having ignited the bus engine. We asked him to do so as we would otherwise be late and he frowned deeply. He did begin driving, but kept breaking traffic rules and overspeeding and his anger was apparent in the way he drove. He also snapped at anybody who talked to him, even if it was a stranger. Since then he has been the same and I have seen him staring at the students mulitple times. His reckless driving has almost got us in several accidents and several students have sustained minor injuries because of this. I ask that you please address this issue as soon as possible as we have had a number of close calls already and I would not like anyone in my class to get hurt. I am also worried about the way he keeps staring at us and would like to request you to please question him before letting him drive again, and have a friend or faculty member go on a test run with the next driver you consider before hiring them. Please take this into consideration and take action as otherwise it would hurt the student body and cause immense grief to their families if they were to be harmed in any way. Yours sincerely Ilsa Ahmed

Dear Principal

I hope this letter finds you in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 health and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 times. I would like to bring your attention to an urgent matter relating to the school and its integrity, and the safety of its students.

Recently, the bus driver Possible spelling mistake found.Abram
Akram
 has been This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 reckless while driving and also
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 rude to almost everybody.

On the 1st of August, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 him staring at This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 with an odd look on his face without having ignited the bus engine. We asked him to do This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 as we would otherwise
 be Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).late, and
late and
 he frowned deeply
. He did This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 driving, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 breaking traffic This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirements
rules
 and Possible spelling mistake found.overspendingover speeding
overspeeding
 and his anger was apparent in the way he drove. He also
 snapped at anybody who talked to him, even if it was a stranger.

Since The comma is probably missing here: "then, he".then, he
then he
 has been the same and I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 him staring at the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
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mulitple
 times. His reckless driving has almost This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 us in several accidents and several You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 have sustained minor injuries because of this
.

I ask that you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 address this issue as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible as we have had a number of close calls already and I would not like anyone in my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 hurt. I am also
 worried about the way he This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retains
keeps
 staring at us and would like to request you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 question him This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 letting him drive again, and have a friend or faculty member go on a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evaluate
test
 run with the next
 driver you consider This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 hiring them.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 take this into consideration and take action as otherwise
 it would hurt the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
student
 body and cause immense grief to their families if they were to be harmed
 in any way.

Yours sincerely


Possible spelling mistake found.ElsaLSAIPSAIliaIFSAINSA
Ilsa
 Ahmed