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An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, offer to find somewhere to stay give advice about what to do give information about what clothes to bring

Dear Mine, It's very delightful to hear that you are going to spend your two-week holiday in my hometown, and I am really excited to give you more detailed information relating to your next break time. I would be extremely happy if you could dwell in my house which has plenty of rooms, and I will arrange one for you. In case you prefer to stay in a marvelous hotel with a reasonable price, booking is very simple and let me do it for you. There are numerous places of interests that I want to recommend to you. Spending your time visiting a history museum, climbing mountains or swimming at a beach is fantastics. The best vehicle is a motorbike, since the distance is quite short and it's convenient for sightseeing along the roads. I will send you some routes with photos, and you can have a look and choose what you like. Last but not least, it's summer now. Therefore, you should bring some T-shirts, shorts and swimwears for beach time; it can help you feel really comfortable. Anyway, I can't wait to see you. Lots of love,
Dear Mine,

It's
very
delightful to hear that you are going to spend your two-week holiday in my hometown, and I am
really
excited to give you more detailed information relating to your
next
break time.

I would be
extremely
happy if you could dwell in my
house
which has
plenty
of rooms, and I will arrange one for you. In case you prefer to stay in a marvelous hotel with a reasonable price, booking is
very
simple and
let
me do it for you.

There are numerous places of interests that I want to recommend to you. Spending your time visiting a history museum, climbing mountains or swimming at a beach is
fantastics
. The best vehicle is a motorbike, since the distance is quite short and it's convenient for sightseeing along the roads. I will
send
you
some
routes with photos, and you can have a look and choose what you like.

Last
but
not least, it's summer
now
.
Therefore
, you should bring
some
T-shirts, shorts and
swimwears
for beach time; it can
help
you feel
really
comfortable.

Anyway, I can't wait to
see
you.

Lots of
love
,
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IELTS letter An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, offer to find somewhere to stay give advice about what to do give information about what clothes to bring

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
189 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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