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You and your family are moving to another country, and you are looking for rented accommodation there.

You and your family are moving to another country, and you are looking for rented accommodation there. OlWBj

Dear Mr. Williams, My family and I plan to relocate to a new country and require your assistance in taking a home for rent. I am a software engineer and my wife is a doctor. We have two kids of age 10 and 12. My parent will be accompanying me to new country. I would prefer a house in-spite of a flat. Keeping the family members in mind I require a two-story house having minimum three bathrooms, three rooms and a kitchen. I would be better if can have a garden. Coming to the location I would go for a location where a school, a park and a hospital are in the vicinity. My office is situated in the cyber park so if a property with above mentioned location can be found near the cyber park then it will be great. Internet speed should be good in the area this will be helpful in case of work from home. Looking forward for your assistance. RegardsJoy

Dear Mr. Williams, My family and I plan to relocate to a new country and require your assistance in taking a home for rent. I am a software engineer and my wife is a doctor. We have two kids of age 10 and 12. My parent will be accompanying me to new country.

I would prefer a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 in-spite of a flat. Keeping the family members in mind I require a two-story This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 having minimum three bathrooms, three rooms and a kitchen. I would be better if can have a garden.

Coming to the location I would go for a location where a school, a park and a hospital are in the vicinity. My office is situated
 in the cyber park This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 if a property with above mentioned location can be found
 near the cyber park then it will be great. Internet speed should be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 in the area this will be helpful in case of work from home.

Looking forward for your assistance.

Possible spelling mistake found.Regards Joy
RegardsJoy