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You are looking to a part time job write a letter to an employment agency in your letter introduce yourself

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Dear sir, I am writing this letter with regard to job vacancy that you mentioned in Down newspaper on 28th of August. However, I am interested in this offer, Additionally, My name is Maryam Mehboob D/O Mehboob Ahmad, I recently completed my MBA majoring in business management from Agriculture University Faisalabad. I believe, my presence in your farm would be fruitful for you, and I would like to increase your knowledge that I'm interested in financial advisor, As to manage all workers in account department. At this time, I would like to inform you, that I have 2 years working experience in multinational company as account manager; furthermore, I have taken various computer courses from Oxford College. Besides, my computer opearting skills are outstanding consequently, I can handle every sort of problem related to the computer. Please respond as your earlier convenience. I look forward hearing from you. Faithfully yours, Mariam.
Dear sir,

I am writing this letter with regard to job vacancy that you mentioned in Down newspaper on 28th of August.
However
, I
am interested
in this offer,
Additionally
, My name is
Maryam
Mehboob
D/O
Mehboob
Ahmad, I recently completed my MBA majoring in business management from Agriculture University Faisalabad.

I believe, my presence in your farm would be fruitful for you, and I would like to increase your knowledge that I'm interested in financial advisor, As to manage all workers in account department.

At this time, I would like to inform you, that I have 2 years working experience in multinational
company
as account manager;
furthermore
, I have taken various computer courses from Oxford College.
Besides
, my computer
opearting
skills
are outstanding
consequently
, I can handle every sort of problem related to the computer.
Please
respond as your earlier convenience. I look forward hearing from you.

Faithfully
yours, Mariam.
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IELTS letter You are looking to a part time job write a letter to an employment agency in your letter introduce yourself

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
151 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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