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Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school in your letter what you enjoy about your the course

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Dear sir, I am writing this letter to express my greatest pleasure to attend the course at your adorable institute. Without a doubt, it was the wonderful time at your cookery scool, because all the instructors were immensely coorporative and kindhearted. Moreover, the course members who attended this course with me were quite Joly. However, i enjoyed every sort. Obviously, I learned there plethora of cooking skills consequently, now I can cook anything without hesitation. Undoubtedly, now I can prepare the Pakistan and as well as Italian cousins without any help. It's great pleasure for me. Finally, it would be immensely beneficial for all of us if you arrange an other cookery classes of baking. Briefly, it expand your popularity through out the city. Nevertheless, your institute one of the best in our town. Thank you Soo much for your attention. I look forward hearing from you. Faithfully yours, Maryam.
Dear sir,

I am writing this letter to express my greatest pleasure to attend the course at your adorable institute. Without a doubt, it was the wonderful time at your cookery
scool
,
because
all the instructors were
immensely
coorporative
and kindhearted.
Moreover
, the course members who attended this course with me were quite
Joly
.
However
,
i
enjoyed every sort.

Obviously
, I learned there plethora of cooking
skills
consequently
,
now
I can cook anything without hesitation.
Undoubtedly
,
now
I can prepare the Pakistan and
as well
as Italian cousins without any
help
. It's great pleasure for me.

Finally
, it would be
immensely
beneficial for all of us if you arrange
an other
cookery classes of baking.
Briefly
, it
expand
your popularity
through out
the city.
Nevertheless
, your institute one of the best in our town.

Thank you Soo
much for your attention. I look forward hearing from you.

Faithfully
yours,

Maryam
.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school in your letter what you enjoy about your the course

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  American English
7 paragraphs
150 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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