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Dear Dilobar, I hope you are feeling much better whether you are at home or hospital right now.Of course ,you are able to sit in the garden and enjoy the sunshine. We all miss you in the course and look forward to your return.There have been a few changes since you went into hospital.We moved to a building which is called "Sharqona" ,near bus station.We took several writing lessons. I think you are watching mini lessons that the teacher is sending by telegram.We all keep in mind given words and the expressions of them.Besides, I deem you read them as well and discover time to memorize before you return to course. Get well soon and look after yourself.See you soon! Best regards Hayothon.

Dear Dilobar, I hope you are feeling much better whether you are at home or hospital right now. Of course, you are able to sit in the garden and enjoy the sunshine. We all miss you in the course and look forward to your return. There have been a few changes since you went into hospital. We moved to a building which is called "Sharqona", near bus station. We took several writing lessons. I think you are watching mini lessons that the teacher is sending by telegram. We all keep in mind given words and the expressions of them. Besides, I deem you read them as well and discover time to memorize before you return to course. Get well soon and look after yourself. See you soon! Best regards Hayothon. APENe
Dear Dilobar, I hope you are feeling much better whether you are at home or hospital right now. Of course, you are able to sit in the garden and enjoy the sunshine. We all miss you in the course and look forward to your return. There have been a few changes since you went into hospital. We moved to a building which is called "Sharqona", near bus station. We took several writing lessons. I think you are watching mini lessons that the teacher is sending by telegram. We all keep in mind given words and the expressions of them. Besides, I deem you read them as well and discover time to memorize before you return to course. Get well soon and look after yourself. See you soon! Best regards Hayothon.
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IELTS letter Dear Dilobar, I hope you are feeling much better whether you are at home or hospital right now. Of course, you are able to sit in the garden and enjoy the sunshine. We all miss you in the course and look forward to your return. There have been a few changes since you went into hospital. We moved to a building which is called "Sharqona", near bus station. We took several writing lessons. I think you are watching mini lessons that the teacher is sending by telegram. We all keep in mind given words and the expressions of them. Besides, I deem you read them as well and discover time to memorize before you return to course. Get well soon and look after yourself. See you soon! Best regards Hayothon.

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  American English
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130 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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