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Email to Tim about visiting education fair

Email to Tim about visiting education fair e36bA

Hi Tim, I am glad that you are interested to visit the education fair as I am planning to go too! I am available this week, so I can join you and your cousins to this education fair. I think there are many courses that I am interested to get information about as I am still hesitating on which course I would choose to pursue and I am not really clear about which college would best suits me, which is also my main purpose for this time of education fair visit. The courses that I am currently quite interested in including architecture, computer science, software engineering and accounting, so I would certainly ask about these few courses. How about you? Do you find any courses that you are interested in? I am not considering about studying abroad currently due to the worsening crisis of pandemic. I think it’s not a good idea to study abroad for now as the Covid-19 Delta variant is very infectious and the risk of infecting the disease is getting very high as well. Regarding the vocational courses, I would like to sign up for them as well. I am looking forward to learn new skill from these courses together with you. See you soon! Gary

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Gary