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You ordered a book online for exam preparation it has been sometime for this order and you have not received your book. Write a letter to the e-commerce company for the same.in your letter Describe your purchase order of the book. so the importance of book for you. Say what you want officer to do for you.

You ordered a book online for exam preparation it has been sometime for this order and you have not received your book. Write a letter to the e-commerce company for the same. in your letter Describe your purchase order of the book. so the importance of book for you. Say what you want officer to do for you. NrymW
Dear sir/madam, I am Greena Royal, and I have ordered a guidebook for dentistry from your website before a week which I have not received yet. Therefore, I am writing this letter to you to deliver the book as quickly as possible. I had placed my order for this master book for the final examination on the 3rd of April. I also had confirmation by a message that the book would be delivered within three-four days it has been seven days since my purchase, still I have not got it. I have paid rupees 3000/- on the same day when I tracked my belonging, displayed that the guide is on the way. Furthermore, I have my final examination next month. Consequently, it is high time to focus more on my study, and the delay in getting this reference book made my preparation at hold. Moreover, I have spent a huge amount on this material. So I am also concerned about my money. It would be a great help if you can contact your shipping department and inquire about my problem. I would also like to request you to ship my order by Fastrack service if feasible. I am hoping for good support from your side. And looking forward to getting my guide soon. Yours faithfully, Greena Royal
Dear sir/madam,

I am
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Greena
Royal, and I have ordered a guidebook for dentistry from your website
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before
a week which I have not received
yet
.
Therefore
, I am writing this letter to you to deliver the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
as
quickly
as possible.

I had placed my order for this master
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
for the final examination on the 3rd of April. I
also
had confirmation by a message that the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
would
be delivered
within three-four days it has been seven days since my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
,
still
I have not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
it.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have paid rupees 3000/- on the same day when I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tracked
my belonging, displayed that the guide is on the way.
Furthermore
, I have my final examination
next
month.
Consequently
, it is high time to focus more on my study, and the delay in getting this reference
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
made my preparation at hold.
Moreover
, I have spent a huge amount on this material.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
I am
also
concerned about my money.

It would be a great
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
if you can contact your shipping department and inquire about my problem. I would
also
like to request you to ship my order by
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Fastrack
service if feasible.

I am hoping for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
support from your side. And looking forward to getting my guide
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Greena
Royal
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IELTS letter You ordered a book online for exam preparation it has been sometime for this order and you have not received your book. Write a letter to the e-commerce company for the same. in your letter Describe your purchase order of the book. so the importance of book for you. Say what you want officer to do for you.

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216 words
6.0
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