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Your local hospital had advertised for people to do unpaid work helping at the hospital.you would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time write a letter to the hospital in your letter explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital say what type of unpaid work you would ba able to do give details of when you would be available for this work.

Your local hospital had advertised for people to do unpaid work helping at the hospital. you would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time write a letter to the hospital in your letter explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital say what type of unpaid work you would ba able to do give details of when you would be available for this work. 6xLxW
Dear john, I hope you are well? I am writing a letter to request you to work in your in my community hospital which advertised couple of weeks ago. I am interested to do unpaid workFirstly, I am helping person by nature. Similarly, because of corona pandemic most of the people are dying. However, in the past time I had done diploma in nursing. I have a experience of that field and familer too. Furthermore, I want to help people by giving good treatment and proper medication. i like to do free service there. Inaddition, from my childhood I am so passionate to help people when other individuals are in the problems. I would be free from next week. Likewise, my office will be closed for one month after Monday. I will be free and I can give my full time to help human being. I look forward to your quick response. Yours faithfully, Alash sanjel
Dear john, I hope you are well? I am writing a letter to request you to work in your in my community hospital which advertised
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couple of
weeks ago. I
am interested
to do unpaid
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workFirstly
, I am helping person by nature.
Similarly
,
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because
of corona pandemic most of the
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people
are dying.
However
, in the
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past time
I had done diploma in nursing. I have
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a
experience of that field and
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familer
too.
Furthermore
, I want to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
by giving
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
treatment and proper medication.
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
like to do free service there.
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Inaddition
, from my childhood I am
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so
passionate to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
when other individuals are in the problems. I would be free from
next
week.
Likewise
, my office will
be closed
for one month after Monday. I will be free and I can give my full time to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
human being. I look forward to your quick response. Yours
faithfully
,
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Alash
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
sanjel

IELTS letter Your local hospital had advertised for people to do unpaid work helping at the hospital. you would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time write a letter to the hospital in your letter explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital say what type of unpaid work you would ba able to do give details of when you would be available for this work.

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