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you and accepted have both been accepted to a study abroad program in Paris, france. Write a letter to your friend

you and accepted have both been accepted to a study abroad program in Paris, france. Write a letter to your friend xaEVw

Hello Ram, Hope you’re doing good, I’m writing this letter to congratulate you on your selection to France university. I’m glad that we both have been qualified for the same college. As I was checking the website of the university, I found out plenty of facilities they are providing for the hostel and it’s only available for those who will reserve these seats, one month prior to admission. It would be great if we became roommates however, we both have the same branch, it would be convenient for us to study together. Let me know what you think about it. On the other hand, Paris is known for its mesmerizing beauty and I have also booked some of the great hotels to travel around the place. There are plenty of museums which you would love to visit and we can also see the famous Ifel tower. I have all the arrangements ready for our trip. I’m very excited about our new journey. Let me know, what you think about it. I’m waiting for your response. Your friend, Khushboo

Hello Ram,

Hope you’re doing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
, I’m writing this letter to congratulate you on your selection to France university. I’m glad that we both have been qualified
 for the same college.

As I was checking the website of the university, I found out This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
plenty
 of facilities they are providing for the hostel and it’s This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 available for those who will reserve these seats, one month prior to admission. It would be great if we became roommates however
, we both have the same branch, it would be convenient for us to study together. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
 me know what you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 about it.

On the other hand
, Paris is known
 for its mesmerizing beauty and I have also
 booked If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?some
some of the
 great hotels to travel around the place. There are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
plenty
 of museums which you would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).visit, and
visit and
 we can also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
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Ifel
 tower. I have all the arrangements ready for our trip. I’m This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 excited about our new journey.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
 me knowIf " what" starts an indirect question, you do not need to put a comma before it. what
, what
 you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 about it. I’m waiting for your response.

Your friend,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Khushboo