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Hello everyone, my name’s Giang, it’s G-I-A-N-G. I’m 18 years old, my birthday is on 22nd of August. Now, I’m a student, I study at HaNoi University of Natural Resources and Environment. I was born and raised in Ha Noi city. My favorite animal is cats. I’m very tall and slim, I have long black hair, fair skin and brown eyes. My father’s name is Hieu. He’s 48 years old. His birthday is on 10th of July. He is a worker. He is medium-height, he has short hair and fair skin. My mother is 46 years old. Her name’s Nhu. She was born on 20th of April. She is a businessman, so she’s very busy. She is short, about 1 metre 55, she has short brown hair and dark skin. I have an elder sister, her name’s Quyen. She’s 22 years old. Her birthday is on 11th of September. She just graduated from college. She loves animals so much. Her favorite animal is dogs. She is very tall and not too fat. She has long brown hair, light skin and black eyes.
Hello everyone, my
name’s
Giang
, it’s G-I-A-N-G. I’m 18 years
old
, my birthday is on 22nd of August.
Now
, I’m a student, I study at
HaNoi
University of Natural Resources and Environment. I
was born
and raised in Ha
Noi
city. My favorite animal is cats. I’m
very
tall and slim, I have long black
hair
,
fair
skin
and brown eyes. My father’s
name
is
Hieu
. He’s 48 years
old
. His birthday is on 10th of July. He is a worker. He is medium-height, he has short
hair
and
fair
skin
. My mother is 46 years
old
. Her
name’s
Nhu
.
She
was born
on 20th of April.
She
is a businessman,
so
she’s
very
busy.
She
is short, about 1
metre
55,
she
has short brown
hair
and dark
skin
. I have an elder sister, her
name’s
Quyen
.
She’s
22 years
old
. Her birthday is on 11th of September.
She
just
graduated from college.
She
loves
animals
so
much. Her favorite animal is dogs.
She
is
very
tall and not too
fat
.
She
has long brown
hair
, light
skin
and black eyes.
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IELTS letter introduce each family member

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
182 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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