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Hello everyone, my name’s Giang, it’s G-I-A-N-G. I’m 18 years old, my birthday is on 22nd of August. Now, I’m a student, I study at HaNoi University of Natural Resources and Environment. I was born and raised in Ha Noi city. My favorite animal is cats. I’m very tall and slim, I have long black hair, fair skin and brown eyes. My father’s name is Hieu. He’s 48 years old. His birthday is on 10th of July. He is a worker. He is medium-height, he has short hair and fair skin. My mother is 46 years old. Her name’s Nhu. She was born on 20th of April. She is a businessman, so she’s very busy. She is short, about 1 metre 55, she has short brown hair and dark skin. I have an elder sister, her name’s Quyen. She’s 22 years old. Her birthday is on 11th of September. She just graduated from college. She loves animals so much. Her favorite animal is dogs. She is very tall and not too fat. She has long brown hair, light skin and black eyes.

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