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You are a large chain of retailers seeking a major manufacturer for a range of T-shirts for teenagers. You attended Shanghai World Expo Exhibition in Shanghai last month and are very interested in the selection of T-shirts made by TESTEX company. Write a letter of about 100 words to the company asking them to send you their current price list and give you a quantity discount in addition to a 20% trade discount because you usually order in large quantity.

You are a large chain of retailers seeking a major manufacturer for a range of T-shirts for teenagers. You attended Shanghai World Expo Exhibition in Shanghai last month and are very interested in the selection of T-shirts made by TESTEX company. Write a letter of about 100 words to the company asking them to send you their current price list and give you a quantity discount in addition to a 20% trade discount because you usually order in large quantity. dl2aP
Dear sir or madam, I am writing as an owner of a large chain of retailers with regard to working with your company. I have been seeking a major manufacturer to help me produce a range of T-shirts for teenagers for months. When I attended Shanghai World Expo Exhibition in Shanghai last month, I was interested in the selection of T-shirts made by your company, TESTEX company. I would like to ask you to send me your current price list and give you a quantity discount in addition to a 20% trade discount. Your company and mine can cooperate together and grow fast together. I would very much appreciate working with your company. Yours faithfully, Loc
Dear sir or madam,

I am writing as an owner of a large chain of retailers with regard to working with your
company
. I have been seeking a major manufacturer to
help
me produce a range of T-shirts for
teenagers
for months. When I attended Shanghai World Expo Exhibition in Shanghai last month, I
was interested
in the selection of T-shirts made by your
company
,
TESTEX
company
. I would like to ask you to
send
me your
current
price list and give you a quantity discount
in addition
to a 20% trade discount. Your
company
and mine can cooperate together and grow
fast
together. I would
very
much appreciate working with your
company
.

Yours
faithfully
,

Loc
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IELTS letter You are a large chain of retailers seeking a major manufacturer for a range of T-shirts for teenagers. You attended Shanghai World Expo Exhibition in Shanghai last month and are very interested in the selection of T-shirts made by TESTEX company. Write a letter of about 100 words to the company asking them to send you their current price list and give you a quantity discount in addition to a 20% trade discount because you usually order in large quantity.

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
115 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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