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Super market incident the other day

Super market incident the other day rGPwN

Dear colleagues, Thanks a lot for showering so much love amidst your busy schedule. I feel blessed. I’m indeed indebted to each and every one of you. Your affection and care have made me forget the injury and motivates me to join work soon. It makes me want to be with all of you. It’s quite boring at the hospital. My day starts with a prayer conducted by the Mother Superior for every patient in the hospital. Then there are doctor visits, nurses who come time and again to check if I’ve taken the pills, etc. In the middle of this, I switch on the television and watch movies. I’ve almost finished watching all the new releases. In the afternoons, I take a nap. The duty doctor for the evening comes for a routine checkup, followed by an array of nurses monitoring all the vitals. I’ve befriended a nurse here with whom I talk for some time in the late evening. Then I fall asleep. I had a displaced fracture in the knee. So I was given emergency care, and minor surgery was performed, after which the doctors allowed me to rest in a normal room. The doctor has advised me not to strain the leg. They would soon discharge me, but I’ve to follow up with physiotherapy. It would take about 6 to 8 weeks for a complete recovery. Thanks again for your love. Jane

Dear colleagues,

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. Jane