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You and your family have just rented an apartment and one or two problems occurred. Write a letter to the landlord. Describe the problems and tell him what you want him to do.

You and your family have just rented an apartment and one or two problems occurred. Write a letter to the landlord. Describe the problems and tell him what you want him to do. 1Mwq

Dear Mr. James, I am your new tenant from apartment number 341, Harrison Street. I moved in with my family one week ago. I am writing this letter to appraise you with some problems that we are facing in the apartment. The taps in the bathrooms are leaking because of which my two year old daughter has slipped twice. The shower is also not working properly. The lock of the main door is also not aligned properly. We have to push the door hard to lock it. All these problems need immediate action. As you have rented out so many apartments, you must be having a tie-up with some plumber and carpenter. You may call them directly or give me their contact numbers so that I can call them at the earliest. As you know I have signed a lease of one year with you and the rent is also on the higher side because you have included the maintenance charges in that. Hoping for a prompt action from your side! Yours sincerely, Kiran

Dear Mr. James,

I am your new tenant from apartment number 341, Harrison Street. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 in with my family one week ago. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am writing this letter to appraise you with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 problems that we are facing in the apartment.

The taps in the bathrooms are leaking This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of which my two year This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 daughter has slipped twice. The shower is also
 not working properly
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 lock of the main door is also
 not aligned properly
. We This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 push the door This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 to lock it.

All these problems need immediate action. As you have rented out This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 apartments, you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 be having a tie-up with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 plumber and carpenter. You may call them directly
 or give me their contact numbers This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that I can call them at the earliest. As you know I have signed a lease of one year with you and the rent is also
 on the higher side This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 you have included the maintenance charges in that.

Hoping for a prompt action from your side!

Yours sincerely
,

Kiran