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writing to inform you that I am leaving the prestigious organisation ABB Limited

writing to inform you that I am leaving the prestigious organisation ABB Limited J05o6

Dear sir I am writing to inform you that I am leaving the prestigious organisation ABB Limited by end of this month as my annual contract is ending on 31st March During this tenure, I have enjoyed working here however, now I feel this is the time to broaden my Horizon and gain more experience in different direction moreover, these days my keen interest is in to exploring the work culture of abroad. In your Esteem organisation I have learnt about ins and outs of embedded system and had lots of practical experience, which will eventually give weightest to my curriculum vitae moreover, acquired knowledge of interpersonal skills thus it will help me in all kind of industries. I would be grateful if you provide me experience letter for my future reference. Thank you for your help and support Yours sincerely Neha

Dear sir

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Yours sincerely


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IELTS letter writing to inform you that I am leaving the prestigious organisation ABB Limited

Letter

American English

4 paragraphs

141 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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