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Writing Practice 30301 B2 A group of customers from Asia are visiting your headquarters. Write a letter to your manager with a planned programme for the visit. - details should include: o which staff members, and why, should accompany the visitors o the product/services which the customers wish to see. o the kinds of activities (business and non-business) which should be organised for the visit Please write your report on the paper provided. Write your answer in between 150-180 words. You will be graded on layout, structure, language use and vocabulary range.

Writing Practice 30301 B2 A group of customers from Asia are visiting your headquarters. Write a letter to your manager with a planned programme for the visit. - details should include: o which staff members, and why, should accompany the visitors o the product/services which the customers wish to see. o the kinds of activities (business and non-business) which should be organised for the visit Please write your report on the paper provided. Write your answer in between 150-180 words. You will be graded on layout, structure, language use and vocabulary range. e3087

Dear Mr John, I am writing this letter with the purpose of outlining the programme I have prepared for the upcoming visit of some Asian customers. To begin with, I believe that our customers should be accompanied by the head of H&R. In fact, that woman is extremely good at dealing with people and I think she will treat our guests in a magnificent way. Secondly, this visit represents an opportunity to show our clients something that belongs only to us. Therefore, I planned a tour in our factories to show the production process so that our customer can understand all the steps that are beyond our product. To conclude, I think that it would be great to enjoy a typical Italian dinner all together. Thus, our costumers will not only enjoy their trip, but they will also feel part of an international family which will increase our brand loyalty. I will be available if you need any help to organize the day. I am looking forward to receiving a response in the near future, Francesco Paganelli

Dear Mr John,

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programme
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some
 Asian customers.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, I believe that our customers should be accompanied
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H&R
. In fact, that woman is extremely
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good
 at dealing with This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 she will treat our guests Consider replacing "in a magnificent way" with the adverb for "magnificent"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in a magnificent way
.

Secondly
, this visit represents an opportunity to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 our clients something that belongs This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 to us. Therefore
, I planned a tour in our factories to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 the production process This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that our customer can understand all the steps that are beyond our product.

To conclude
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that it would be great to enjoy a typical Italian dinner all together. Thus
, our costumers will not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 enjoy their trip, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 they will also
 feel part of an international family which will increase our brand loyalty.

I will be available if you need any This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 to organize the day.

I am looking forward to receiving a response in the near future,

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