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Writing for Maria and appreciate that about last night Party

Writing for Maria and appreciate that about last night Party Wg2jb
Dear MariaI'm writing to appreciate you for your best entertain at last night. I was happy to eat dinner with your family. family is the best happiness in the entire world. I was able to spend my time in peace with you and the best part of last night's party was that I was able to make a chocolate cake with your little sister. She reminds me of my daughter. I hope to meet your family and you as soon as possible Best RegardsMahdieh
Dear
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MariaI
'm writing to appreciate you for your best entertain at last night.

I was happy to eat dinner with your family.
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family
is the best happiness in the entire world. I was able to spend my time in peace with you and the best part of last night's party was that I was able to
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make
a chocolate cake with your
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little
sister. She reminds me of my daughter.

I hope to
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meet
your family and you as
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soon
as possible

Best
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RegardsMahdieh
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83 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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