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I am writing to express this letter my strong dissatisfaction with my car which I was repaired my car at workshop by craftsman

I am writing to express this letter my strong dissatisfaction with my car which I was repaired my car at workshop by craftsman Wg2AD

I have been very loyal client of your workshop for many years and this is certainly not the quality that I have come to expect from you. Due to the, on 24 th semtember, I repaired car but it does not work. Problem is give to change electrical storage battery to craftsman and I was repaired the car by craftsman. But after I go home accumulator of the car did not work. As you know it is winter now and this also aggravates the situation since I am not able to use the car. If they do not pay for it, I will get two repair estimates for you so that you can determine how you will pay for the repair. I will gladly return the defective repairing to you. I look forward to receving you reply. Yours sincerely. Sarah.

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