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: Write a letter to the manager of a publishing house to complain about the quality of the calendar you have bought from one of its stores. You should write about 200 words. Which do you like, the wall calendar or the desk one? And Why?

: Write a letter to the manager of a publishing house to complain about the quality of the calendar you have bought from one of its stores. You should write about 200 words. Which do you like, the wall calendar or the desk one? And Why? 0ax9G
Dear Manager, I am writing to complain about the quality of the calendar. On 18 December, I purchased (item) – (model number) at store (address) I have to say that the quality of calender can not acceptable and does not match the sample calendar I was shown in store. I think the best way to solve the problem is to replace it with a better one and arrange for return the. . at no cost I have attached a photocopy of my receipt as proof of purchase. Please call me at (phone number) or send me email via (email address) to discuss this matter further I am looking forward to hearing your response and action for this issue latest Yours faithfully, Thao
Dear Manager, I am writing to complain about the quality of the calendar. On 18 December, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchased
(item)
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.
–
(model number) at store (address)

I
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have to
say that the quality of
Did you mean "calendar", a system of organizing days? A 'calender' is a machine.
calender
can not acceptable and does not match the sample calendar I
was shown
in store. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
the best way to solve the problem is to replace it with a better one and arrange for return
Did you forget something after 'the'?
the.
Don't put a space before the full stop
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
at
no cost

I have attached a photocopy of my receipt as proof of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
call me at (phone number) or
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
me email via (email address) to discuss this matter
further


I am looking forward to hearing your response and action for this issue latest

Yours
faithfully
,

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Thao

IELTS letter : Write a letter to the manager of a publishing house to complain about the quality of the calendar you have bought from one of its stores. You should write about 200 words. Which do you like, the wall calendar or the desk one? And Why?

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  American English
4 paragraphs
121 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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