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appologies for loud voice of my guests

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Dear Mr. SmithI hope you're doing well and healthy. I am sending this letter regarding of the yesterday loud sounds of my guests during our practice for our, music band concert. I want to apology for this and want to tell you it will end today after our final practice. secondly, due to your complaint to the building supervisor, I should kindly remind you based on the law of the home building the tenants could use their music instruments from 9 in the moring till 8 in the evening. for the weekends law says the time could extend to ten in the night for friday nights. finally, I want to tell you we really apperciate your patience and I attached two tickets for you and Ms. Smith for our concerts and we will be more than happy if you attet to concert. I am really upset again about the noise and hope see you soon. kind regards, ajig ajigof
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hope you're doing well and healthy. I am sending this letter regarding of the yesterday loud sounds of my guests during our practice for our, music band concert. I want to apology for this and want to
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secondly
, due to your complaint to the building supervisor, I should kindly remind you based on the law of the home building the tenants could
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their music instruments from 9 in the
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till 8 in the evening.
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IELTS letter appologies for loud voice of my guests

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
158 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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