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friend birthday invited you to party but, you can not attend due to meeting.

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Dear Pal, I am writing this letter in refresnce to your invitaion about your birthaday fate on coming Monday. I would like to mention here as we are friends since childhood hence the formality has no place in our frienship. Your birthday is somthing i can not forget as we have celebrated it So many times the memories can not allow me to fade it for even a moment. From the deepest of my heart I would like to say sorry as on this coming monday i will not be able to join wartmeth of the ceromony along with you, While i am writing this i am so much in pain and the woreds can not express the saroowness of my soul. Now you must be wondring what on earth can be more importent for me to attend your special day. As you know i am working with an NGO which is helping underprevilaged kids in there studies and expouser related to future Jobs. I am the one who is responsible to attand a meeting with a corporate to present PPT whih has perepaid to get fanacial sport for these kids I am workig on this project from quite a long time along with a coulge. The Time and day of the meeting has been deceide by the compony CSR manager Resisting this was not posible even knowing about birthday, as the future of twenty kids relly on the Support. Without asking i am sure you understand the need of the hour and will accept my apology for not being there. I pomise you i will see you on next weekend and will bring the cake baked by my hands and my love. Till we meet again Your friend Satwinder
Dear Pal,

I am writing this letter in
refresnce
to your
invitaion
about your
birthaday
fate on coming Monday. I would like to mention here as we are friends since childhood
hence
the formality has no place in our
frienship
. Your birthday is
somthing
i
can not forget as we have celebrated it

So
many
times the memories can not
allow
me to fade it for even a moment.

From the deepest of my heart I would like to say sorry as on this coming
monday
i
will not be able to
join
wartmeth
of the
ceromony
along with you, While
i
am writing this
i
am
so
much in pain

and
the
woreds
can not express the
saroowness
of my soul.
Now
you
must
be
wondring
what on earth can be more
importent
for me to attend your special day. As you know
i
am working with an NGO which is helping
underprevilaged
kids in
there
studies and
expouser
related to future Jobs.

I am the one who is responsible to
attand
a meeting with a corporate to present PPT
whih
has
perepaid
to
get
fanacial
sport for these kids I am
workig
on this project from quite a long time along with a
coulge
. The Time and day of the meeting has been
deceide
by the
compony
CSR manager

Resisting this was not
posible
even knowing about birthday, as the future of twenty kids
relly
on the Support.

Without asking
i
am sure you understand the need of the hour and will accept my apology for not being there.

I
pomise
you
i
will
see
you on
next
weekend and will bring the cake baked by my hands and my
love
.

Till we
meet
again

Your friend

Satwinder
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IELTS letter friend birthday invited you to party but, you can not attend due to meeting.

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289 words
6.0
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