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Hello everyone, my name is Thao Vy. Today I will talk about my daily routine.

Hello everyone, my name is Thao Vy. Today I will talk about my daily routine. 2RyOJ
Hello everyone, my name is Thao Vy. Today I will talk about my daily routine. I think everybody has a daily routine to follow. The same is also true for me. I am a student of class 4. Every day I get up early in the morning at around 5. 45 a. m. I brush my teeth, wash my hands and face, and get ready for school. I have my breakfast and then go to school. I study in Vo Trường Toản Primary School. I am in class 4 now. My school is about fifteen minutes away from my home. My mother drives me to school. My school starts from 7. 00 a. m. in the morning and gets over at 4. 30 p. m. in the afternoon. After I come back from school I have my dinner. Sometimes I take a bath after coming back from school. At 5: 30 p. m. in the evening, my mother drives me to extra classes with my private tutors. I come back home by 8 p. m. I switch on my computer to watch some cartoon shows. After watching TV for 15 minutes or half an hour, I do my homework given by my private tutor. At 9 o'clock I eat supper if I am hungry. Then at 10 o'clock I go to sleep.
Hello everyone, my name is
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Thao
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Vy
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I will talk about my daily routine.

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everybody has a daily routine to follow. The same is
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true for me. I am a student of
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class
4. Every day I
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get
up early in the morning at around 5. 45 a. m. I brush my teeth, wash my hands and face, and
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get
ready for
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school
. I have my breakfast and then go to
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school
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I
study in
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Vo
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Trường
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Toản
Primary
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School
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I
am in
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class
4
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now
. My
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school
is about fifteen minutes away from my home. My mother drives me to
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school
.
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My
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school
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from 7. 00 a. m. in the morning and
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over at 4. 30 p. m. in the afternoon.
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back from
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school
I have my dinner.
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Sometimes
I take a bath after coming back from
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school
. At 5: 30 p. m. in the evening, my mother drives me to extra classes with my private tutors. I
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come
back home by 8 p. m. I switch on my computer to
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watch
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some
cartoon
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shows
. After watching TV for 15 minutes or half an hour, I do my homework
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by my private tutor. At 9 o'clock I eat supper if I am hungry. Then at 10 o'clock I go to sleep.
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IELTS letter Hello everyone, my name is Thao Vy. Today I will talk about my daily routine.

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2 paragraphs
222 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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