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Hi Duc, How are you? I hope all is well. I would like to tell you something about my daily life. Might I take a moment of your time to review the mail. I am a university student, so most of my time is spent studying. Every day in the morning, my mother usually wakes me up at 6 o'clock but I didn't get up until 7 o'clock. Then I brush my teeth and wash my face. Since I rarely eat breakfast, I save a lot of time in the morning. Due to the epidemic situation, I can't work part-time and I can't go to school. Because my class usually starts at 12: 30pm and finishes at 4: 30 pm. So in the morning I study Chinese by myself. In addition to studying, in my free time, I often take my dog for a walk on the dike. I also consider it as exercise. My favorite meal is dinner, because only in the evening my family is full, that is at 7 pm. In the evening, I usually spend 2 hours going online, chatting with friends, checking mail, surfing facebook and reading the newspaper. Then I do homeworks and I have a habit of watching movies from 11p. m to 1am and I finally end the day with a sleep. My day is not too special, but I feel very satisfied, that's all. I have told you something about my daily life. How about your daily life? Are you ready to let me know about it?
Hi
Duc
,

How are you? I hope all is well. I would like to
tell
you something about my daily life. Might I take a moment of your
time
to review the mail. I am a university student,
so
most of my
time
is spent
studying. Every day in the morning, my mother
usually
wakes me up at 6 o'clock
but
I didn't
get
up until 7 o'clock. Then I brush my teeth and wash my face. Since I rarely eat breakfast, I save
a lot of
time
in the morning. Due to the epidemic situation, I can't work part-time and I can't go to school.
Because
my
class
usually
starts
at 12: 30pm and finishes at 4: 30 pm.
So
in the morning I study Chinese by myself.
In addition
to studying, in my free
time
, I
often
take my dog for a walk on the dike. I
also
consider it as exercise. My favorite meal is dinner,
because
only
in the evening my family is full,
that is
at 7 pm. In the evening, I
usually
spend 2 hours going online, chatting with friends, checking mail, surfing
facebook
and reading the newspaper. Then I do
homeworks
and I have a habit of watching movies from 11p.
m
to 1am and I
finally
end
the day with a sleep. My day is not too special,
but
I feel
very
satisfied, that's all.

I have
told
you something about my daily life. How about your daily life? Are you ready to
let
me know about it?
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IELTS letter Write an email about your typical day

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
256 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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