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Writing a letter to you to friend about the Canada life?

Writing a letter to you to friend about the Canada life? mbwGK
Dear Joseph. Hooping you u will find and find the belt of radish. I am writing this letter to share my happy filling with you regarding Canada life. Will you know that I have been living in canada since last 2 year. I am very good to be hear I got a good work. I also brought a new house in this nation with low price moreover I also got he new brand car in months plain. The life I every good and pics. You know that I am doing job in MNC company which provide a life work offer with good packages. it will good if you also visit one to find a job in Canada. Hooping you will thing about it. Lovingly, Joseph.
Dear Joseph.

Hooping you u will find and find the belt of radish. I am writing this letter to share my happy filling with you regarding Canada life.

Will you know that I have been living in
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since last 2 year. I am
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I
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good
work. I
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house
in this nation with low price
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got
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he
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new
brand car in months plain. The life I every
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and pics.

You know that I am doing job in
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MNC
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company
which provide a life work offer with
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good
packages.
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will
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if you
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visit one to find a job in Canada.

Hooping you will
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thing
about it.

Lovingly
,

Joseph.
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IELTS letter Writing a letter to you to friend about the Canada life?

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  American English
7 paragraphs
125 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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