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Write a letter to one of your friend to tell her about the holiday you are having.

Write a letter to one of your friend to tell her about the holiday you are having. ENe5B
Dear Tom, I hope you are well. I am going to write this letter to tell you about my holiday I am having in the next week. I am going to Phu Quoc Island because it is quite well-known in Viet Nam. Moreover, Phu Quoc Island is not only wonderful but also the weather is so fresh. When we go there, we can take part in many activities such as sightseeing, swimming in the sea, playing sports on the sand, and taking some photos. I take a trip with my parents, my husband, and my aunt. We hope we will have a nice holiday. You tell me about your holiday you are having. I look forward to hearing from you. Love
Dear Tom,

I hope you are well. I am going to write this letter to
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tell
you about my holiday I am having in the
next
week.

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am going to
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Island
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it is quite well-known in
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wonderful
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the weather is
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so
fresh. When we go there, we can
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take part
in
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many
activities such as sightseeing, swimming in the sea, playing sports on the sand, and taking
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some
photos. I take a trip with my parents, my husband, and my aunt. We hope we will have a nice holiday.

You
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tell
me about your holiday you are having. I look forward to hearing from you.

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Love

IELTS letter Write a letter to one of your friend to tell her about the holiday you are having.

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
120 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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