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Dear, I am writing this letter with the purpose of explaining my opinion on how our company should sponsor a sport event. To begin with, since our company is known for the production of healthy energy drink, every sport is suitable to the vision of our company. However, I would propose to sponsor an extreme sport event, such as snowboarding or parachuting, due to the fact that energy drinks are an integral part of these kind of sports. As far as promoting the products is concerned, I consider the idea of giving to each participant a couple of our energy drinks with the purpose of showing them on social networks. Thus, we will achieve higher visibility, our product will increase its popularity and consumers will become more aware of it. To conclude, the effectiveness of the project will be evaluated through two reports. One consists in an immediate analysis of the number of sales in the short term, while the second analyzes the effects a year after the conclusion of the project. I hope you will take into account all my suggestions, Yours sincerely, Francesco Paganelli

Dear,

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I hope you will take into account all my suggestions,

Yours sincerely
,

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