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Dear Human Resource Department, I am writing to express my interest in your recruitment post on Linked. com for Sales Manager position. As my working experiences, I believe that I am well-qualified to match this position. I noted from the job description that you are looking for a person who has selling and managing skills and have more than 2 years experiences in real estate. My previous job was a team leader in Savills Vietnam which is multinational company selling properties in Ho Chi Minh Ciy and many other places. I was responsible for seeking customer, making an appointment, closing the deal, and managing the Sales team. I was led my team to achieve 200 billion VND in sales, becoming the best sales team in Company in 2019. I am an adaptable, flexible and creative person. Choosing your company to apply for job, which I am very carefully study through your information. Hopefully I can become a part of your path for your further success. I am ready to receive a job from now and hope to have a chance for meeting up with you at the interview. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Your sincerely, Big Daddy.
Dear Human Resource Department,

I am writing to express my interest in your recruitment post on Linked.
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com
for
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Sales
Manager position. As my working experiences, I believe that I am well-qualified to match this position.

I noted from the
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job
description that you are looking for a person who has selling and managing
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skills
and have more than 2 years experiences in real estate. My previous
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job
was a
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team
leader in
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Savills
Vietnam which is multinational
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company
selling properties in Ho Chi Minh
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Ciy
and
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many
other places. I was responsible for seeking customer, making an appointment, closing the deal, and managing the
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Sales
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team
. I
was led
my
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team
to achieve 200 billion VND in
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sales
, becoming the best
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sales
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team
in
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Company
in 2019.
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I
am an adaptable, flexible and creative person. Choosing your
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company
to apply for
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job
, which I am
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very
carefully
study through your information.

Hopefully
I can become a part of your path for your
further
success.

I am ready to receive a
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job
from
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now
and hope to have a chance for meeting up with you at the interview.

I look forward to hearing from you
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soon
.

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Your
sincerely
,

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Big
Daddy.
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IELTS letter writing a letter to apply for a job

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
200 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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