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what are the benefits of foreign education discuss both views and give your opinion

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I Nimal Ranjith, is father in-low of Jayasinghage Tharanga Lakmali jayasingha, who is applying for student visa to Canada to study Graduate certificate in hospitality and tourism operations management in Fanshawe college, London, Ontario I am happy to support my daughters-in-law financially for her foreign education, so that she would be able to gather the academic qualification, which she was dreaming of and to reach her future goals. Required funds for this purpose have already been reserved in fixed deposit held at Seylan Bank under her name. These funds were accumulated from a vehicle sale (2000, 000 LKR) I run a family business with my son, and I am getting 1/4 income of net profit, which is about LKR. 100, 000/= per month It is my solid hope that the respective visa officer will give a favorable reply to my daughter in -low, enabling him to enter Australia to pursue her higher education and to gain skills and knowledge required to make her career goals a success. I have attached all the supporting documents for your perusal. Should you have any inquiries or require further information, please do not hesitate to contact us. Thank you. Yours Sincerely,
I
Nimal
Ranjith
, is father in-low of
Jayasinghage
Tharanga
Lakmali
jayasingha
, who is applying for student visa to Canada to study Graduate certificate in hospitality and tourism operations management in
Fanshawe
college, London, Ontario

I am happy to support my daughters-in-law
financially
for her foreign education,
so
that she would be able to gather the academic qualification, which she was dreaming of and to reach her future goals. Required funds for this purpose have already
been reserved
in
fixed
deposit held at
Seylan
Bank under her name. These funds
were accumulated
from a vehicle sale (2000, 000
LKR
) I run a family business with my son, and I am getting 1/4 income of net profit, which is about
LKR
. 100, 000/= per month

It is my solid hope that the respective visa officer will give a favorable reply to my daughter in -low, enabling him to enter Australia to pursue her higher education and to gain
skills
and knowledge required to
make
her career goals a success.

I have attached all the supporting documents for your perusal. Should you have any inquiries or require
further
information,
please
do not hesitate to contact us.

Thank you.

Yours
Sincerely
,
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IELTS letter what are the benefits of foreign education discuss both views and give your opinion

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6.0
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