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I’ve got a problem and I need your advice. Next month I have a week’s vacation with my group of close friends. We are going to go camping and have some picnic in resort and I really want to go with them. However, I also have an exam in Korean. And the problem is my parents refuses to let me go. They want me to stay at home and have well-prepared for my exam. To be honest, I had to hit the books and studied hard since last week. So I strongly believe that I will get a good mark. However, they are scared that I will fail the exam. I am extremely fatigued right now. Please let me know what you think I should do.
I’ve
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Next
month I have a week’s vacation with my group of close friends. We are going to go camping and have
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some
picnic in resort and I
really
want to
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go with
them.
However
, I
also
have an exam in Korean. And the problem is my parents refuses to
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let
me go. They want me to stay at home and have well-prepared for my exam. To be honest, I had to hit the books and studied
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hard
since last week.
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So
I
strongly
believe that I will
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get
a
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good
mark.
However
, they
are scared
that I will fail the exam. I am
extremely
fatigued right
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now
.
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Please
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me know what you
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I should do.
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IELTS letter write a letter to your friend and ask some advice

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  American English
1 paragraphs
126 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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