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Writing a letter of complaint about an English online course in about 120 words.

Writing a letter of complaint about an English online course in about 120 words. j9jxy
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to complain about your English online course which is advertised in Learning Magazine. I enrolled the course which intended to begin on March 3rd 2021 and at that time, it was on discount 30 percent. However, I had to wait for the course a few months before it actually started in June due to a reason that there was not enough participant. In order not to cancel the course, I put off lots of plans and I was extremely unpleasant. To make matter worse, I had to pay 100 percent tuition fee. When I asked your staff, she explained that my class was opened in June and all courses in June were not marked down. I would like to hear your explanation for above problems. Thank you for your time. Yours faithfully, Nguyen Mai Anh.
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to complain about your English online
course
which
is advertised
in Learning Magazine. I enrolled the
course
which intended to
begin
on March 3rd 2021 and at that time, it was on discount 30 percent.
However
, I had to wait for the
course
a few months
before
it actually
started
in June due to a reason that there was not
enough
participant. In order not to cancel the
course
, I put off lots of
plans and
I was
extremely
unpleasant. To
make
matter worse, I had to pay 100 percent tuition fee. When I asked your staff, she
explained
that my
class
was opened
in June and all
courses
in June were not marked down. I would like to hear your explanation for above problems.

Thank you for your time.

Yours
faithfully
,

Nguyen Mai
Anh
.
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IELTS letter Writing a letter of complaint about an English online course in about 120 words.

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
140 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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