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Reply to complaint letter from neighbor 1. apologize 2. reason 3. what to do

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Dear Mr. Milsons, I am writing this letter as a response to the complaint letter received from you for the noise. We sincerely apologize for the inconvenience caused and humbly request for forgiveness. As per the home safety concerns, we are installing smoke detectors, subsequently, seeing the devastating fire accident in the nearby apartment. We thought it is necessary and quite important to have one at home, consequently, ordered devices online. Thus, started to install and to ensure they are working, tested the gadgets for around thirty minutes to be sure, they are loud and alarming. I am terribly sorry for that noise, furthermore, deeply regret for the inconvenience, caused that resulted to, interrupt your child nap. I would like to invite your family for dinner tonight, as a token of apology for all the ruckuses, will ensure that the noise tone will be lowered from next time. I hope to hearing back from you. With best regards,
Dear Mr.
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Milsons
,

I am writing this letter as a response to the complaint letter received from you for the noise. We
sincerely
apologize for the inconvenience caused and
humbly
request for forgiveness.

As per the home safety concerns, we are installing smoke detectors,
subsequently
, seeing the devastating fire accident in the nearby apartment. We
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
it is necessary and quite
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important
to have one at home,
consequently
, ordered devices online.
Thus
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
to install and to ensure they are working,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tested
the gadgets for around thirty minutes to be sure, they are loud and alarming.

I am
terribly
sorry for that noise,
furthermore
,
deeply
regret for the inconvenience, caused that resulted to, interrupt your child nap. I would like to invite your family for dinner tonight, as a token of apology for all the ruckuses, will ensure that the noise tone will
be lowered
from
next
time.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
hope to hearing back from you.

With best regards,
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IELTS letter Reply to complaint letter from neighbor 1. apologize 2. reason 3. what to do

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  American English
6 paragraphs
158 words
6.5
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