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student Introduce about mysefl

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Good morning Nice to meet you! My name is Linh Nhi I’m 19 years old. My hometown is Ba Vì, which is a small and quiet place. I am studied English major. I'm currently a second-year student at Ha Noi University of natural resources and environment. In the future, I hope to give back to society by being a responsible person. I like to watch English cartoons, it's not only good but also brings many useful things. I like to travel with my friends, but I don't have much time for this. My favorite day of the week is Sunday, I usually go back home, because I don't want to miss a moment with my family.
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My name is
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Linh
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Nhi


I’m 19 years
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My hometown is Ba
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English major.

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currently
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University of natural resources and environment. In the future, I hope to give back to society by being a responsible person.

I like to
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watch
English cartoons, it's not
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also
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many
useful things. I like to travel with my friends,
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I don't have much time for this.

My favorite day of the week is Sunday, I
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go back home,
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I don't want to miss a moment with my family.
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IELTS letter student Introduce about mysefl

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  American English
7 paragraphs
116 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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