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The local government is palnning to chang the bus timetable. You are not happy about this proposed changes. write a leeter to the newspaper.

The local government is palnning to chang the bus timetable. You are not happy about this proposed changes. write a leeter to the newspaper. j9w8d
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the proposal of changing the bus timetable that I have read in your newspaper. As the majority of employees in Sana'a city, I should be available at my office at 8 AM; Therefore, I should be riding the bus at 7. 30 AM. Unfortunately, your rescheduling for the bus plan at 8 AM has been causing a delay for numerous clerks. Furthermore, with the proposed time plan most seats of the bus are empty, which leads to squander the government resources. I highly recommend authorities reconsider the timetable issue and plane for 30 minutes earlier timetable, or they add one more bus at 7. 30 Am. I would appreciate if you could look into this matter at your earliest convenience. I look forward to your reply. Yours faithfully Moatasem Saeed
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the proposal of changing the bus timetable that I have read in your newspaper.

As the majority of employees in Sana'a city, I should be available at my office at 8 AM;
Therefore
, I should be riding the bus at 7. 30 AM. Unfortunately, your rescheduling for the bus plan at 8 AM has been causing a delay for numerous clerks.
Furthermore
, with the proposed time plan most seats of the bus are empty, which leads to squander the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
resources.

I
highly
recommend authorities reconsider the timetable issue and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
plane
for 30 minutes earlier timetable, or they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
add
one more bus at 7. 30 Am. I would appreciate if you could look into this matter at your earliest convenience.

I look forward to your reply.

Yours
faithfully


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IELTS letter The local government is palnning to chang the bus timetable. You are not happy about this proposed changes. write a leeter to the newspaper.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
141 words
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