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Lift cancellation letter

Lift cancellation letter K02yw
Dear Sir We are constructed 100 room’s hotel with the name of “HOTEL EL MAGNEFICO “near Surat railway station. This is our prestigious hotel & we choose OTIS for our premises. we had given 1 unit order to you on 29TH July 2017. This order was release by us to your dealer yogi engineers. This lift was completely installed with good ride quality. looking to the elevator performance and our past experience we have placed another 1 unit with same specification at same hotel with 10% Advance. We are already using your elevator in many of our hotels like HOTEL BALWAS, HOTEL STAY INN, HOTEL SARITA. now due to the demonetization and corona pandemic situation we are facing some financial crunch so we decided to hold the work of new elevator. we giving our assurance that whenever we require the elevator for same premise we will go for OTIS only. We would like to request you that please adjust our advance payment of new lift in to AMC of old elevator. Yours sincerely
Dear Sir

We
are constructed
100 room’s
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hotel
with the name of
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“HOTEL
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EL
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MAGNEFICO
“near Surat railway station.

This is our prestigious
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hotel
& we choose OTIS for our premises.
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we
had
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given
1 unit order to you on 29TH July 2017. This order was release by us to your dealer yogi engineers. This lift was completely installed with
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good
ride quality.
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looking
to the
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elevator
performance and our
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past experience
we have placed another 1 unit with same specification at same
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hotel
with 10% Advance. We are already using your
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elevator
in
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many
of our
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hotels
like
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HOTEL
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BALWAS
,
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HOTEL
STAY INN,
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HOTEL
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SARITA
.
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now
due to the demonetization and corona pandemic situation we are facing
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some
financial crunch
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so
we decided to hold the work of new
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elevator
.
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we
giving our assurance that whenever we require the
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elevator
for same premise we will go for OTIS
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only
.

We would like to request you that
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please
adjust our advance payment of new lift in to AMC of
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old
elevator.

Yours
sincerely
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IELTS letter Lift cancellation letter

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
172 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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