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last week you colleagues at the office threw a suprise party

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Dear Tom, How are you? I wanted to write and tell you about the wonderful party which was celebrated by my colleagues for my promotion last week. As you all know, I've worked at the office for a long time. And after a hard-working period, I've been stimulated. The news came as a complete shock and I was also proud of myself. But the most surprising thing was the party that my companions commemorated for my success. I still clearly remember, when I opened the door, a lot of balloons, candles, and blossoms were decorated in the room. One by one came to give me congratulations. At that time, I was on cloud nine and grateful for everything. Later, we decided on the day off for the banquet and entertainment. It was a fantastic memory that I‘ll never forget. I wish you could be on my side that day, I'm sure you'll have the same great feeling as me. Have you had any happiness these days? Tell me. I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Lots of love, Huong
Dear Tom,

How are you? I wanted to write and
tell
you about the wonderful party which
was celebrated
by my colleagues for my promotion last week.

As you all know, I've worked at the office for a long time. And after a
hard
-working period, I've
been stimulated
. The news came as a complete
shock and
I was
also
proud of myself.
But
the most surprising thing was the party that my companions commemorated for my success. I
still
clearly
remember, when I opened the door,
a lot of
balloons, candles, and blossoms
were decorated
in the room. One by one came to give me congratulations. At that time, I was on cloud nine and grateful for everything. Later, we decided on the day off for the banquet and entertainment. It was a fantastic memory that I‘ll never forget.

I wish you could be on my side that day, I'm sure you'll have the same great feeling as me. Have you had any happiness these days?
Tell
me. I’m looking forward to hearing from you.

Lots of
love
,

Huong
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IELTS letter last week you colleagues at the office threw a suprise party

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
178 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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