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With references of your job advertising on your homepage, I would like to apply for the work placement at the Barnett Community Centre. I am student at Parrs Wood College in Manchester and I am currently doing my A-Level. I am looking for a work placement in the field of social work. I enjoy working with people and especially children and I am interested in getting more work experience. I am very flexible and would like to improve my skills of social work. My mother tongue is English. and I speak French at the European level B2. I am also qualified to work with MS Office. My hobbies and other interests are traveling, foreign languages and swimming. I had other work placements in social institutions like Southernwood Nursery or Sacred Heart Hospital Manchester and other holiday jobs like work at MacBurger restaurant, Manchester or local newsagent, Manchester I enclose my curriculum vitae and certificates. Please do not hesitate to contact me if you should require further information’s.
With references of your job advertising on your homepage, I would like to apply for the
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work
placement at the Barnett Community
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Centre
.

I am student at
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Parrs
Wood College in
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Manchester and
I am
currently
doing my A-Level. I am looking for a
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work
placement in the field of social
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work
.
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I
enjoy working with
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people
and
especially
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children and
I
am interested
in getting more
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work
experience.

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I
am
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very
flexible and would like to
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improve
my
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skills
of social
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work
. My mother tongue is English.
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and
I speak French at the European level B2. I am
also
qualified to
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work
with MS Office.

My hobbies and other interests are traveling, foreign languages and swimming.

I had other
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work
placements in social institutions like
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Southernwood
Nursery or Sacred Heart Hospital Manchester and other holiday jobs like
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work
at
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MacBurger
restaurant, Manchester or local newsagent, Manchester

I enclose my curriculum vitae and certificates.
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Please
do not hesitate to contact me if you should require
further
information’s.
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IELTS letter Writing a letter of application

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
167 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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