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The replying letter for my best friend

The replying letter for my best friend J3Y2a

Dear Tom: The purpose of writing this letter is to inform you about the Uzbekistan’s national and international holidays. Let me tell you, in Uzbekistan there are a plenty of holidays such as Children’s Day, New Year, Independence Day and others. In Uzbekistan festivals are celebrated on a large scale. You asked me that we have Christmas. My answer is yes. But in Uzbekistan it is called New Year. This celebration is one of the most beloved of mine. Because in the New Year Day we have an opportunity to meet our relatives not seen for a long time. Apart from this, we can begin all over again in the new year, leaving the grievances and problems we have with someone in the old year. This is an international anniversary, because every country in the world celebrate this holiday. We perform this festivity on a large scale with enjoy and relish. And we have several international feasts such as The International Woman’s Day, New Year, The International Old Men and Women’s Day and others. By the way, do you celebrate The Red Crescent Society Day? And what vacations are celebrated in your country? What is your darling gala? And how do you celebrate it? I look forward to your prompt reply. Yours faithfully, John Brown.

Dear Tom:

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Yours faithfully
,

John Brown. 