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Working on a farm is tricky

Working on a farm is tricky M3wLN
Working on a farm is very hard. Many people like cows and chicken and birds and pigs and elephants and horses. They also like to eat pork and ham. Some people are vegan or vegetarian. They don't eat ham or pork. Sometimes, they don't even drink milk or eat eggs. that's gross. Therefore, It is tricky to cook for many people with a different background at the same time. You have to ask the people what they want to eat before you cook.
Working on a farm is
very
hard
.
Many
people
like cows and chicken and birds and pigs and elephants and horses. They
also
like to
eat
pork and ham.
Some
people
are vegan or vegetarian. They don't
eat
ham or pork.
Sometimes
, they don't even drink milk or
eat
eggs.
that
's gross.
Therefore
, It is tricky to cook for
many
people
with a
different
background at the same time. You
have to
ask the
people
what they want to
eat
before
you cook.
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IELTS letter Working on a farm is tricky

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
83 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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