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Writing a letter of advice to a friend

Writing a letter of advice to a friend RyNlQ

First of all, thank you for writing me this letter. I'm sorry to hear about your problems. Perhaps, I can give some advice and your problems will be solved soon by yourself. Your first problem is time and how to manage your time efficintly while preparing exams. I suggest that you could try to do a list what you can do and what you can't do during a day. You shouldn't only thinking about exam. Because it causes stress. Futhermore, it can be exhausted. Your next problem is how to copy with both study and doing household chores at home. It is not problem, if you pay attention to time management. I also suggest that you should tell your husband to help your house work. It may be to look after your children, to help preparing food and etc. Your last problem is what to relieve the anxiety before exam. You must rely on your experience, knowledge and qualification. It is most point of getting good marks in exam. Hope my advice works. Let me know what happens. Best wiahes, Cristina

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problems
. Perhaps, I can give This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 advice and your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomplicationdilemmaquestionobstacletroubledispute
problems
 will be solved
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soon
 by yourself. Your first
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problem
 is time and how to manage your time Possible spelling mistake found.efficiently
efficintly
 while preparing exams. I suggest that you could try to do a list what you can do and what you can't do during a day. You shouldn't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
The verb 'shouldn't' requires base form of this verb: "think"think
thinking
 about exam. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 it causes This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuate
stress
. Possible spelling mistake found.Furthermore
Futhermore
, it can be exhausted
. Your next
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problem
 is how to copy with both study and doing household chores at home. It is not You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomplicationdilemmaquestionobstacletroubledispute
problem
, if you pay attention to time management. I also
 suggest that you should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 your husband to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 work. It may be to look after your children, to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
The verb 'help' is used with an infinitive: "to prepare" or "prepare".to prepareprepare
preparing
 food Write the name of the item after 'and' or use only "etc".etc
and etc
. Your last You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomplicationdilemmaquestionobstacletroubledispute
problem
 is what to relieve the anxiety This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 exam. You This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 rely on your experience, knowledge and qualification. It is most point of getting This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 marks in exam. Hope my advice works. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
 me know what happens. Best Possible spelling mistake found.wisheswithes
wiahes
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Cristina