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To ask appologise your friend dont attend her party

To ask appologise your friend dont attend her party k5YYM

Dear Scarlet, What can I say, exept I am so sorry that I missed your birthday party last week due to my unexpected business trip. I hope you celebrated your birthday party extremely good and with your nearest, unfortunately I was unable to attend. I planned to participate your party and I took a gift for you but only a hours before my boss command to take off to Canada immediately and must take part in a job meeting. I am so sorry my friend and now if you consent I will preform evening party next Sunday in five star restaurant for to justify my guilt. I hope my apologies will be accepted. LovelySimona Addison

Dear Scarlet, What can I say, Possible spelling mistake found.exceptexemptexert
exept
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so
 sorry that I missed your birthday You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
 last week due to my unexpected business trip. I hope you celebrated your birthday You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
extremely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 and with your nearest, unfortunately I was unable to attend. I planned to participate your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
 and I took a gift for you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "a hour" or simply "hours"?a hourhours
a hours
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 my boss command to take off to Canada immediately and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :participate
take part
 in a job meeting. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 sorry my friend and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 if you consent I will preform evening You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
next
 Sunday in 'five star' is missing a hyphen.five-star
five star
Possible agreement error. The noun 'restaurant' seems to be countable, so consider using: "restaurants".restaurants
restaurant
 for to justify my guilt. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 hope my apologies will be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
accepted
. Possible spelling mistake found.
LovelySimona
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