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Describe a social networking site you use regularly.

Describe a social networking site you use regularly. G9Rmw
Hello teacher and my friends. In your free time, what do you often do? For me, whenever I have free time I use social networking sites like: fb, instagram, youtube. I often spend 2 hours to utilize them. There are much news that I am interested in. For instance, on Youtube, I can watch my favorite films, video music, cartoons and studying videos. With several simple manupulation, I could find out the programs which I want to watch
Hello teacher and my friends. In your free time, what do you
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do? For me, whenever I have free time I
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social networking sites like:
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fb
,
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instagram
,
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youtube
. I
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often
spend 2 hours to utilize them. There are much news that I
am interested
in.
For instance
, on
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Youtube
, I can
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watch
my favorite films, video music, cartoons and studying videos. With several simple
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manupulation
, I could find out the programs which I want to
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watch
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IELTS letter Describe a social networking site you use regularly.

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